1. You started your presentation without saying something like “This is my podcast about x.” 2. Clear, pleasant voice 3. I especially liked your discussion of her role in the White House and your other interesting facts. The contrast between her husband’s shyness and her outgoing nature was interesting, especially since it had a role in his reelection. Her Wednesday meetings obviously helped her husband too. The information about her first marriage and the horrible loss she endured when her first husband her son died was thought provoking. 4. I never knew that she served as hostess for Thomas Jefferson when he was president. 5. I loved your conversational tone.
Weaknesses
1. You should have named her siblings. 2. You forgot some of the required information a. You didn’t say anything about her education. b. You failed to say how old she was when her husband was elected.
Podcast flowed very fluently.
ReplyDeleteGood length
Facts were told clearly
All in all, the podcast is above average.
-Brett B.
Kerrigan
ReplyDeleteStrengths
1. You started your presentation without saying something like “This is my podcast about x.”
2. Clear, pleasant voice
3. I especially liked your discussion of her role in the White House and your other interesting facts.
The contrast between her husband’s shyness and her outgoing nature was interesting, especially since it had a role in his reelection. Her Wednesday meetings obviously helped her husband too. The information about her first marriage and the horrible loss she endured when her first husband her son died was thought provoking.
4. I never knew that she served as hostess for Thomas Jefferson when he was president.
5. I loved your conversational tone.
Weaknesses
1. You should have named her siblings.
2. You forgot some of the required information
a. You didn’t say anything about her education.
b. You failed to say how old she was when her husband was elected.
Overall grade: B 27/30